tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4232008318147201662.post7272788071924850192..comments2023-03-27T01:28:39.957-07:00Comments on Your Substantially Less Frequent Than Daily Dose of Danger: On FictionCaptain Dangerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03475897531834840033noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4232008318147201662.post-48015392706185213742013-10-28T03:25:12.219-07:002013-10-28T03:25:12.219-07:00I really like it!!!! I want to know what happens ...I really like it!!!! I want to know what happens next! It's fast paced and you explain the background necessary without it dragging down the story. And you've definitely set up a very interesting plot, with several layers of challenges. How will Steve and Frankl get along? How will they prove their innocence? Who really killed the Bishop? How are they going to stop darkness form coming out of the pit?? Don't worry about typos, etc for now, because you can always fix that when you edit it.Ashleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12122217075428420773noreply@blogger.com